It sounds like a great starting point and gets all the important information across. :) However you want to improve on it, it could use a little more details - like examples of times when she learned something important in her survival skills, or details of which animals are actually safe or ways she's managed to befriend normally hostile animals. Some of it is written a tad odd too, making it a little hard to follow... Like; "Liking a persona better of being a party woman, who was everything that Aphrodite was not. It was who people that she was and she had hoped it would be who she would become eventually. But it only seemed to bring loneliness which until one day she thought would never go away." Maybe change it to; "So she wrapped herself in a persona that mimicked the ideal of a party wench [b][i][Note: Just using more medieval language, you can put woman if you want][/i][/b], far removed from her true personality. It was who others wanted her to be and it was how she fit in and if she was honest with herself, it was someone she had hoped to become one day. However the more she delved into the role, the more lonely she became, nearly consuming her - it was like a being caught in a whirlpool." Of course, use your own words, but the example above gives not only imaginative descriptors, but also makes it very clear what she's doing and how it makes her feel. ^.^