[@Depressed]: Two problems.  First, while the Jackal is an important villain for my interpretation of Spider-Man at the moment, I am not sure at the moment Ben Reilly would fit in the moment.  However, we can work something out if you really want to play the character.  However, the biggest problem is that you blatantly copied the "Character Origin & Backstory" directly from Marvel Wikia.  Not only is that plagiarism (yes, that's not only limited to academics), this roleplay does not necessarily follows the canon of the mainstream Marvel comics, but rather a blank slate for players to develop the characters as they see fit.  If you want to have your finished character sheet accepted, you will have to rewrite the "Character Origin & Backstory" section all over again.

Edit: Also, Daily Planet is DC, not Marvel.