[@Nyther]I like it, just a couple of things. Firstly, he's in his early nineties? So he's pretty much a [b]child[/b] in Yautja society then. Secondly, unless otherwise asked and accepted by myself first, [b]every character[/b] is starting out as an Young Blood member of their clan/the hunting party, and therefore would probably not have even half of the experience that Zazin appears to have. Essentially, this would be their initiation ritual into manhood/Predatorhood. Does this sound acceptable? You can say yes or no, I won't bite. :P