Yes, I am a little OCD, I see nothing wrong with the character's consept, magic and magic level is debateable, but I will leave that to the GMs. My gruff is a small and unimportaint one. Spaceing. The cramped style here makes me wince, try something like this:
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I have everything done but history, will get that done when I get back from work. Hopefully just before I go to work.

Name: Cody 'Storm' Bloodstein

Age: [s]872[/s] 17.

Birthday: 12/12

Magic: Absolute Defense (User can stop any attack up to a certain degree (e.g. magic power used to stop attack must be equal or some used for spell which you are trying to block)

Magic Level: A (Weaker then a Gajeel, but stronger then an Alzack so I just put him here. I can put into B if you prefer)

History: (Paragraph or more)

Personality: Is a VERY laidback individual, many often confusing his laidback and quiet attitude with arrogance. He is also a very quiet fellow and speaks in short, sharp sentences and generally speaking his words will be cold and/or harsh. Honest to a fault and he struggles to understand metaphors and the like. In the rare times he does show emotion he can get caught up in said moment. He also struggles in social situations.

Guild and guild mark location: Wishes to join Phoenix Win, and if he does join the guild mark will be on his right palm

Team Members: None as far

Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. Loyalty
2. Easily forgettable (IDK, sounds good XD)
3. Is a quick learner

Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. Knows no combat based magic
2. Naive
3. Lack of social skills

Greatest Love: (?)

Motivation: Strives to protect those he holds dear seeing as he failed once before

Appearance:
[img]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa365/eccles19/169494.jpg[/img]

Additional Details: Loves skittles (Or the equivalent)
Is a hetrosexual. (Just in case you wanted to know)
He is mainly a pacifist
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Better? Also I suggest a hider (It looks like a crossed out eye) for the image at least.