[quote=@Letter Bee]
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Cool. Anyway, can you take a look at my character on the Characters Tab, and tell me what you think about him?
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He looks fine to me. I prefer more detail when it comes to things like weapons and abilities, since they can provide insight to how your character operates and just how they use their skill. "Intimidation" for example can be fairly hit-or-miss; pointing your gun at cowardly thieves and peasants might be sufficiently scary, but do that on say, Orchid, and she might just bend the barrel.