Beautiful CS Mate, and will be accepted. A few nitpicks though. There's an Extra "O" on Other Disabilities. Are you alright with changing "Several Boxes of Ammo" to "Three Boxes of Ammo (60)" The number in parenthesis is the total count of single bullets. I'm thinking in 20-round boxes, if you want four (or less) I'm fine with that. Do note, we haven't picked a starting location yet, so you may need to edit some information or assuming whatever he deals with in Wyoming takes place during the first Eleven days, then be sure to have a reason to be where everybody else is. Alright? Also, you understand the rules I have written and agree to them? (Oh, Edit here: "Carried Container" was meant to the name of whatever it is, like purse, duffel bag, or in this case "Backpack". Move the gear under "Starting Gear" to either in his backpack or pockets.) All in all, fantastic. I love when people get creative.