Alright guys-- sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. I wanted to be able to sit down and give some good reviews before I post the OOC and start taking official submissions.

[@Zombehs] Not very many improvements I see could be made. I know the map information wasn't up at the time, but if you could mention where Lorcrove is located in relation to the map in your final draft, that'd be great.

[@Captain Jenno] We already spoke via PM, so we good. :)

[@Sodium] While you are certainly more than welcome to create a single character sheet to apply for two different elements, my only qualm is that the section describing Isaac's elements (based off of of which role he would get) is very terse. They seem to be mentioned as neat tricks he can do at parties rather than what they are-- very amazing and impacting gifts. I would like to see a bit more about his discovery of these powers and how they impacted him mentally. He's had them for about 6 years now, so try to explain how he's learned to cope with them. Please also keep in mind (and this is for everyone) that the ability to communicate with animals is not akin to the ability to control them. While I can see Isaac as being a very persuasive person, he might have a difficult time convincing rare animals to forsake a life of freedom for one inside a cage or enclosure (unless he were to trick them, in which case I would be interested to hear more about why he may not be the kind of person to feel sympathetic to their cause-- is he one to befriend animals or manipulate them?). 

[@Scrapula] Very nice! Leon is a gladiator badass. I can't help but feel that your description of his typical attire would be a bit unpractical outside of the arena though. With the harsh weather conditions of Periset, it would be very important that he keep himself covered from head to toe in light, loose fitting clothing in order to protect himself from the sun. Also, while I have no qualms with his gladiator trainer being an orc, I would keep in mind that it is very uncommon for orcs to feel any compassion towards humans. They would sooner use them as a simple means to an end and eat their face than be very nice. This would mean that Branwen might have faced some hostility from his fellow orcs for showing any sort of kindness to Leon. I'm fine with it, but just so long as that's clear. Lastly, and this is a rule I had yet to clarify, healing, just as the use of any elemental power, requires energy. This is important to know since if a light elementos becomes gravely injured, it serves to reason that they may not have enough energy to heal themselves. Just a tidbit of knowledge to keep in mind.

[@Undine] I can't think of many changes I would make. There are a few typos I would recommend correcting before final submission, but that's it. 

Oh... and also... [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/87330-the-seven-elementos/ooc#post-3071165]AN OOC IS BORN![/url] Please review the application rules!