[@Rinoa Rose] Everything looks good, but there are a few things I would recommend adjusting. Firstly, I'm glad you included all of the requirements in your character description, but could you put it into a more paragraph-like format? Just for consistancy's sake. Secondly, could you expand a bit more about how he trained himself to use his newfound ability? Mainly, did he keep it a secret or tell only his family? I ask mainly because it seems like he is very close to his family, so it would be a big deal whether or not he decided to hide it from them.