[quote=@Disdain]
David, I did a thing, and I need to know if it sounds good. It's for a birthday.
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[centre]Marysarah, the wished for child,
A princess above all bitterness;
Neon lights shine over the sea,
Enlighten her as praiseworthy
Nobility does she possess.

Daughter of shield and the undefiled,
Defender and beacon oh so bright,
A harbour kept with surety,
Guarded by she of purity
Seven-day queen as white as light.[/centre]
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It's got wordplay basically everywhere.
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I like it. Keep it.