[quote=@Baklava]
[@NightFlight] Everything looks good so far! The only thing I would recommend adding is her discovery of her abilities. With her just barely being 17, if you are hoping to expand on her initial discovery more in your first post, that's perfectly fine. As of now, however. the roleplay will be starting shortly after if not the night of her 17th birthday. So if you could include something about that, you should be fine. 
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I was planning on having her discover her powers more fully in my first post, so I will definitely get that in there. Thanks for the feedback!