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Sounds good. Here's a sheet.


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[b]Name:[/b] Charles "Puffer" November
[b]Age:[/b] 31
[b]Year of Death:[/b] 2001
[b]Method of Death:[/b] Plain old complications from lung cancer.
[b]Crimes:[/b] Three murders of innocents as a hired assassin.
[b]Appearance:[/b][img]http://media.graytvinc.com/images/KREFT2.PNG[/img]
[b]Weapon:[/b] I'm best with the sniper rifle, but that's probably not the most practical weapon in close quarters, so I'd be fine with a knife.
[b]Backstory:[/b] I was a sniper in Vietnam, and when the war ended, I didn't exactly have the accolades and experience to get any fancy jobs, and became a bartender. One thing led to another and I started smoking heavily, to socialize and blend in with the crowd there. And, as it so happened, this unfortunate life decision led to me developing lung cancer. The moment I saw the diagnosis, I decided that I really, really like the idea of not dying, and went searching for a treatment. As it happens, there was a procedure that could've saved my life, but I was never going to afford it with my bartender wage. So what's a former sniper to do... well, become an interlope, a hitman, a paid assassin, of course! I didn't really feel good about what I was doing... my missions usually involved taking out CEO's and bankers, nobody actually evil, but every time, I kept reminding myself that it was worth it, that I was a survivor, and this happened to be my only chance at survival. Unfortunately, in a...probably deserved... twist of fate, my third contractor somehow managed to find a loophole that allowed him to not pay me. I could... almost pay for the procedure; but almost is not good enough. And so, I was left for dead in a shitty, badly-equipped public hospital.
[b]Height and Weight:[/b] 1,85 m, 82 kg

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Please tell me if he's not deranged/evil enough for the setting.
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I really love the way you've done his background in first person, speaking from the grave!

This is a great character you could make him more derranged if you want but I quite like the idea of having a more 'normal' bad person  in the bunch.

Just one small thing though, if died at age 31 in 2001 then he would have been born in 1970 and the vietnam war ended in 1975 so he would have been too young to have served. maybe change his death year?



Will be making the OOC soon after a bit more interest.