[quote=@mdk] [h3]Runners-up[/h3] 'Kitsune' by [@Dedonus]. Does a lot of things very right, and showcases some clear development as a writer. You're on the right track, [@Dedonus]! [/quote] Thanks for the acknowledgement! Isn't it one of the reasons why we're doing this, to get feedback on our writing? :sun One thing I tried to get right was to write a story that could be self-contained, rather than something that probably would have been more suited for being a chapter of a longer work. Edit: Also, you misspelled my name. There is no "a" in "Dedonus". :hehe