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Firstly, it's considered rather rude and presumptuous to post your CS to the character tab before it's been approved. That Tab is for approved characters.

But forgetting about that for a moment:
The power looks interesting and the rather unique name Bleeders seem to suggest it's from something. I'll give you props for being unique but I'm going to have to ask you to chose another ability. The most prominent reason is that functionally speaking your character's power is specifically designed to be PvP. It attacks humans directly with very little application outside of combat. I'm not going to say that's a bad thing, many of our players have combat oriented abilities but in an RP where Player Vs Player situations are not just likely be expected I can't allow there to be powers that target a person in such a specific and nearly unblockable way. 

Secondly and this had less bearing but you mentioned a synthetic material implanted in her eye. That would suggest she had some awareness of her abilities at a young enough age to avoid injuring herself with them and went to some sort of surgeon. This wasn't in the first post and now that I think of it I may have forgotten to mention it in the OOC but while being a meta isn't illegal (at least in the states and Canada) metas are required to register with the government (not many do for obvious reason). A procedure like that would be very specific and the surgeon would have to realize that the person he was operating on was a meta. He would then be required to report her to the government or risk losing his license to practice. Once she was on a government list the Corporation would be able to find her a lot easier and much sooner than what looked like about twelve years.

But as the power isn't approved that's not really an issue.

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You keep making references to accepting non metas and the Crusaders and Saints not all being metahumans or all having to be metas. The fact is the only non meta humans present in the Center are the guards (most of them anyways) and they don't join prison factions.

With regards to the age I'd prefer you actually listed how long the group has been around. I don't want to have to hunt down random facts in your CS to discover certain information.

What exactly do you mean by "Progressives"?

I'm not going to say that Sam can't be the Leader of the Cross but bear in mind that when the escape comes to pass Edmund and Gloria are going to teleport out as many people in close proximity to them as possible and the likelihood of several different faction leaders being near one another is not altogether likely. If you really want Sam to be the leader of the Cross you are more than welcome to but I would suggest creating an NPC for the job.
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I was more or less going for what they would do when they escaped the prison, as in the faction would still be around after the escape. As for progressive I mean non left-wing politics, Sam is described as a traditionalist and his faction wouldn't allow liberals or communists in their ranks, that's what he is getting at.