[quote=@Crimson Raven] Not bad, only thing is the last paragraph in history. It doesnt quite fit well with the story and a few other reasons. He would have no connection to the goddess of time and the part about the tear is to close to altering the story. Remove the last paragraph of the history and I will aprove. [s]Just expect some bone-headed skull jokes from me. YOHOHOHOHO![/s] [/quote] That last paragraph was a mistake. I thought I deleted it from first attempt.