[@Remipa Awesome]
After consulting the GM and other co-GM, I am sorry to say we must turn down Hunter's application. Aside from the abundant grammatical errors, there appears to be little actual effort put into the CS, like you just chopped it together in twenty minutes or so. Secondly, the idea of a demigod owning a [i]pistol[/i] with a Celestial Bronze cartridge is simply unacceptable, especially one who lives in Camp. Thirdly, you've made him anti-social to the point of a reclusive shut-in. Due to the RP relying on not only quests, but character interaction, this makes him poorly suited for the setting. And lastly, his entire backstory is very muddled and confusing. 

To list a few key problems: it's rare to the point of unbelievable that two separate goddesses had relations with his father. Likewise, to go out monster hunting would require weapons made from Celestial Bronze, Imperial Gold, or Stygian Iron. It's impossible to get [i]any[/i] of those materials unless one went to either Camp Half-Blood or Camp Jupiter prior. Next, one is either a demigod or a mortal. There is no half/half or [i]level[/i] of blood. Lastly, it's chronologically impossible for his sister to have fought in the Titan Wars. To put it in perspective, the main characters from the books (Percy, Annabeth, etc.) are in their early-to-mid thirties at this point. 

Due to these above errors, we simply cannot accept Hunter into this roleplay. Good luck on your further ventures!