Hi there, everyone!

Here's a quick assessment of what we have until now


[@VitaVitaAR] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3087875]Yukimura Chiharu[/url]

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I gotta admit that from all the characters up to now, Chiharu is one of those that fit the mood the most. The typical mahou shoujo heroine, I'd say.

Her power as well is good, especially if she discovers that it doesn't comes solely from the card, later on. I'm waiting to see that Precure-ish Kamehamehadoken make its debut, 'cause I know that's what you must be planning.
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[@Lucius Cypher] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3087928]Kabeyama Chikage[/url]

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Ara ara~ A wild Chikage appears!

Another good one, though I'd say that she looks a tad too old for her age. Maybe, it's just the muscles? I don't know. Nevertheless, I like her so you can keep her the way she's.
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[@RoflsMazoy] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3088038]Reiko Kimura[/url]

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And this, must be my day, 'cause a Reiko popped up as well.

Then gain, a simple and good character, so I like her as well. Though, I have an opinion about your powers. I think that the first and third ones are heavily redundant, so you might as well combine them into a single telekinesis power. Aside from that, she's fine.
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[@McFazzer] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3088148]Delia Lin[/url]

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Since you have already cleared things with me over a PM, I won't comment on your character any further. Carry on. 
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[@Rin] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3088266]Mizuki Wakahisa[/url]

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Another perfectly good character. I think, I've notice a pattern forming around now and am curious how things will go around with so many "ordinary" girls around, but that's what we are here to discover, right? Anyway, she's ok as well, so go for it.
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[@RolePlayerRoxas] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3088425]Yamamoto Rika[/url]

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Phew, at least a pink magical girl. I was worried that we wouldn't get even a single one of those.

Well, it's another good character as well, so you can keep her the way she's right now.
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[@Vocab] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3088910]Mura Sahashi[/url]

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Almost good as she's but there's a few things that I'd like to point. First, I 'd like you think of something for your "Lust" power. Mura already has the most diverse power set in the whole RP (though, I'm willing to allow it because of the 7 Sins theme), so power copying is one thing that doesn't seems fair for her to do, in my opinion.

Second, I don't think that a Japanese 15 years old girl should be knowledgeable about firearms without a good explanation. So, if you want to keep that aspect of her, I'd like to know how she would have access to something as regulated and restricted as guns are on Japan.
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[@Noxx] [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3089919]Nellphaline/Saryn[/url]

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Well, well, well... where should I begin with this one, since I don't want to sound mean?

The best would be to say the truth, I guess. And it's that she's all wrong from the very beginning, with the lack of a family name. Though, I would like the double personality, if it was more like, hmm... say, Banba Mahiru/Shin-ya from Akuma no Riddle (mostly for fun) and not turn her into an antagonist character. Even then, a "bright side/eclipse" idea is good for a sun based character, so I'd like to see it done.

The real problem that I have is that your character brings too much dark undertones to the stroy with a plain backstabber half and those evil powers that shouldn't be part of her build at all, since I've been clarifying the tone of this RP for a little time now. So, I'd like you to fix those things before I can give your character the green light.
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Lastly, I'll give a list of the taken Cards, just o clarify things even further:

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I - The Magician;

VIII - Justice;

IX - The Hermit;

X - The Wheel of Fortune;

XI - Strength;

XII - The Hanged Man;

XIII - Death;

XV - The Devil;

XVIII - The Moon;

XIX - The Sun;

XX - Judgement.
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As well as two more once [@Kimiyosis] and [@liferusher] (I'm still sorry bout forgetting you -.-") have made their choices. With this many players we will reach the second arc of the story way faster than I anticipated, which can actually be good, to say the truth.

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For the time being that was all that I had to say,

See ya later!