[quote=@Aeonumbra] [@Denalz] He looks good, and is accepted. =) [/quote] Awesome! And, thank you. So, I may throw in a couple of minor details and change some things... may have David's sister turned into a brother for example. Would you like me to check with you on these changes before throwing in an initial post? Also, would anyone like to collab? I would be willing to wait to join in until there is a more opportune moment in the story.