[@OtomostheCrazy]

Okay, looks good save for just one problem; when selecting a Human benefit, you get 3 advancements to spend on benefits. I should just call them points, but the book calls them advancements. I think just to make things a little less confusing, I will just call them points. 

So, when selecting the benefit for your background, you get 3 points to spend. If you want a language (if applicable. It's not in the case of a Human Apostate), those cost just one point apiece. But if you want an ability advancement, say +1 Constitution, for example, that costs 2 points. So, you can have an ability advancement and a focus, or 3 focuses. ^^ So, yeah, just fix that one problem and your sheet is good.