[@Wintergrey]
Everything looks pretty good, but Calista's poster just wishes you to change the relations status from Good Friend to at most an Almost Friend, but doesn't mind the love interest at all.

On the subject of the gang, did you want it to be a cartel, or just a street gang that peddles drugs? Gangs are a lot like a family in and of itself and there are some things that need to happen for you to be in a gang. He'd need an initiation into the gang, to prove his loyalty and he would have been told about the implications of being in the crew. If you want or need ideas, send me a PM and we can talk about it. This is more for accuracy than anything else, since the gangs wouldn't be so casual as to bring someone in just for the muscle, so to speak. They want strong people, yes, but they want loyalty until death first and foremost!

Otherwise, it looks great and will probably be accepted with just the edits to relations with Calista.