[quote=@LetMeDoStuff]
Sorry that my post seems a little fast paced and rushed...I am a bit rushed, though I do get carried away with proportion of writing. It does seem a little ridiculous what has happened to him, even though it is set to have happened over a few courses of weeks, leading to the current day in the Nightclub. Sorry again, I should stop apologising, 
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Meh it doesn't seem too bad. The first meetings kind of have to be fast paced so something can occur.