[quote=@HushedWhispers] Nice but mind fixing the color codes and hr code, please. Also, since you elaborated on Sable's good side of the personality and her bad side just went eh so if you could elaborate more on that, as well then I'll definitely accept her. And elaborate on some of the history a bit, too, please. If you need any further help, do not hesitate to PM me with questions. [/quote] Pretty sure I got everything. However, I wasn't all that sure about the hr code and coloring. I didn't see any mistakes with it, but its' getting late here so I may just be overlooking it xD