[quote=@Undine]
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You have a few formatting errors that you need to fix, notably the "CHARACTER'S NAME" at the top and the theme song link at the end.  Also, I would like to see flaws and weaknesses in his personality. 
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Thank you for pointing out the formatting errors, after looking at something for so long you can start to look over the small things. I also edited his personality, hopefully I worded it correctly, I prefer to act out how a person is than write them down and confine them to traits. :)