[quote=@Oak7ree]
[@gcold], [@Leidenschaft] Finally, I think my character is ready. I have expanded his biography to include a reason for his name and updated his skills list and equipment. I have slightly altered the wording in the Skills section to make it more sensible.


[hider=Felix aep Caileach/Trentius]
[b]Basic Information[/b]
	[b]Name:[/b] Felix aep Caileach (real surname Trentius)
	[b]Race:[/b] Imperial
	[b]Age:[/b] 23
	[b]Gender:[/b] Male
	[b]Birthsign:[/b] The Steed
	[b]Place of origin:[/b] Leyawiin, Cyrodiil

[b]Appearance:[/b] Felix aep Caileach is about six feet two, or about 185 centimeters tall. He is a handsome young man with slightly slender features, and after few weeks of martial life he has gained some athleticism. He's not very muscled or big-figured, but he's fast and agile. He has brown short hair and green eyes. His face has a long scar running from right temple to the jaw.

[b]Background:[/b] Felix was born to the Trentius family, who are prominent merchants and cultivators of arts and sciences. Felix was given the best education the family could afford from a very young age. In his teens Felix became an avid student of history and a novice bard, who had a reputation of visiting young and beautiful women at night time for "extracurricular activity". Due to this he has some skill with stealth.
	During his late teens during the Skyrim's Civil War, Felix took a part in the protests against a hated tax for utensils. An imperial patrol tried to control the crowd, but soon the protest flared up and casualties were suffered on both sides. Felix fled from Leyawiin to Skyrim, assuming a new surname, aep Caileach to draw away suspicions. Felix escaped for the fear of imperial authorities and started to earn a living as a bard, even enrolling to the Bards' College for a term. After finishing his term, Felix traveled across Skyrim singing songs and telling tales of Dragonborn's deeds, but as the Dragonborn's tyranny continued and he became more disliked, Felix dropped those from his repertoire. In many taverns he is considered a talented lute player and a singer, but a horrible at poetry.
	One night, Felix became so drunk that he enlisted to a mercenary company by an accident. For the last two weeks, Felix has been trying to grasp the basics of soldiering and fighting with a weapon at hand.

Personality: Born into wealth, Felix has hardly done any physical labour besides travelling in his life. He often wants to have some luxuries in his life or hopes of getting some in his immediate future, although mercenary life has humbled him as a person. Felix' experiences as a travelling bard have given him a taste for extravagance and good company. One of the reasons why he hasn't deserted the mercenary company is because he wants to keep his word and to detail his adventures as a mercenary.

[b]Capabilities[/b]

[b]Skills:[/b]
	Expert in Speech
	Adept in Mercantile and Acrobatics
	Apprentice in Sneak, One-handed bladed weapons and Medium armour
	Novice in Hand-to-hand, One-handed blunt weapons and Light armour.

[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
	[b]Nervous:[/b] Many soldiers have nerves of steel in the heat of battle, but Felix gets nervous easily.
	[b]Inexperienced:[/b] Felix lacks many of the basic skills a soldier needs, but is learning quickly by trial and error.
	[b]Even the Lady Luck has mood swings[/b]: Felix has the uncanny ability of jumping from the frying pan into the fire without a burn or scratch, and ending up either ambushed or falling to the arms of a beautiful woman.

[b]Relations to other characters:[/b] Felix has lots of fair weather friends all around Skyrim, but not really anyone he call a true friend.

[b]Affiliations: Neutral[/b]

[b]Spells:[/b] None

[b]Combat style:[/b] None at the moment, but Felix is trying to learn how to fight a sword and shield.

[b]Other capabilities:[/b] He is a charismatic person and a capable negotiator.

[b]Inventory[/b]

[b]Cash:[/b] 100 Septims
[b]Keys and lockpicks:[/b] None
[b]Clothing and armor:[/b] Boiled leather brigandine-like jerkin and a wool shirt beneath it, a thick wool cloak, cotton trousers, wool socks and leather boots.
[b]Weapons and ammunition:[/b] A steel bastard sword called Fury and a round shield that has a silvery griffin painted on it.
[b]Potion and arcane supplies:[/b] None at the moment.
[b]Jewelry and novelty items:[/b] A lute, a set of dice and an amulet of Talos
[b]Books and documents:[/b] A manuscript [i]My Life as a Mercenary[/i] and a copy of contract.
[b]Food, drinks and provisions:[/b] Ingredients for porridge, some dark ale and bread with him.
[b]Bags, pouches and packs:[/b] A large backpack made from cloth and strips of leather.
[b]Other:[/b] Nothing comes to mind. I think I have finished my character building.
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That's better, I've no gripes with it.