[quote=@Invisible Man] Yeah, I had an idea for this contest but I don't think I'll be joining as well. I can't seem to figure out how to make Jorie a slasher villain, her past is too nice to turn her into a complete monster, and that is the only villain I can think of after watching all of the Halloween movies. [/quote] Villain is a rather strong and diverse word but it can mean a very lot, Dark Oswald is a revolutionary leader, Dark Sapphire is simply a thief with very little regard for the pain and suffering of others. There's a spectrum. Now obviously I don't know the history of your character but reading her CS I can see several possibilities. She's rather unique as an insect faunus so maybe play that (as well as the claw) up a bit. Maybe she went blind as a child and has to use her antenna to see the world, as a result she was bullied and beaten by other children and developed a harsh outlook on life. Or perhaps she's a nocturnal insect who only comes out at night, lives in a dark and damp abandoned building and lashes out at anyone that comes to close. This is reimagining your character. While they still have to be linked don't feel that almost everything has to be the same. I prefer slight changes that result in a radically different fate but that's not a good approach for everyone. If her personality doesn't fit being a villain change her personality. Besides I'm hoping that the next contest has to do with creating a non cannon story using as many of the Dark Side characters as possible so I need more material to work with.