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[@oak7ree] Felix's background and personality are both very short. If you have trouble getting more content down, I would start by extrapolating on what you have so far. For example; how did he get that scar on his face? How did he get drunk and found his way to Markarth? Where did that Griffon emblazoned shield come from?

Also, leave a line between each paragraph, it'll make reading easier.
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[@Gcold] I have written how Felix found his way to Markath, how he got the shield and how he got his scar. And I changed his weapon proficiency from swords to axes, as I think it would be easier for him to swing an axe than a sword.