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DON'T JUDGE ME.
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[@Vhagar] It would depend on how he was trained with the weapon. If he preferred a slashing style, and the glaive is more blade than tip, 2H blade would be appropriate. If not, I would go with what Leiden said, spear. A spear-focused glaive would not have too much trouble defeating armor of its own strength, however, against anything tougher it's gonna be an uphill battle. Blade-focused glaive does have more trouble against equal armor, but, you gain a wider arc of attack. I'll let you decide which one to take, if you want both, you can always split it into 2 adepts.

Also something Leiden said, that picture is not very relevant in a fantasy setting. 

3 different blends of poison is too much for an apprentice, you can change to 3 of the same type.

While 5'11 is slightly below average for an Redguard, it is about average in the context of all races. 

He's not exactly sensitive to all elements, and definitely resistant against sand. I would change it to weakness to frost.

Look, there's nothing wrong with your background and personality, and they're certainly well written. But, both are very average and cliche at parts. We can't reject you because your character is not unique enough, but I would certainly take my time and try to spice it up a little. 
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Everyone else, I'll be making a list of NPCs in the camp. Some of your characters might be affiliated with a couple of them.