[quote=@Leidenschaft] I only have two gripes. One is with the armor and the other is with the weapon. Also, just a quick fyi, I'd class a glaive as a spear(-type weapon, or a polearm, as it were). My other point about the weapon is that glaives were used in 15-16th century Europe specifically to counter better armored knights, which were so outfitted at the time that they were basically invincible to anyone other than another knight. This being the case, its difficulty with armor as you describe isn't a thing. One would stab for weak-points like gaps in the armor around the joints and the eye-slits, as well as that spike on the back and a good thrust from the tip of the head able to pierce plate. My gripe about the armor is that is almost very clearly a sci-fi portrait of a cyber-monk or something. Try to find something else. Also, I'm making last-minute additions to Jorwen's affiliations and relations to other players section. I've also played around with skills and inventory, figured its fair game since we haven't started DON'T JUDGE ME. All in all, he now has a shield emblazoned with his insignia, as well as people in the camp knowing him either by his past service as a Stormcloak and his exploits therein and/or by him mending their clothing or fabric belongings. I have it that Sevine probably knows his name from her days in the Stormcloaks, and vice-versa, as well as him having a professional acquaintance with Sadann, both of them filling support roles while at camp. [/quote] I would expect Sevine to know Jorwen, perhaps she knows him from him mending a torn hem for her? I would be fine if you listed her as Jorwen knowing her. Nonetheless, since they've served in the civil war, there's a possibility they could have been in the same encampment together, and a man with that big of a beard, would definitely stick in her mind, so she would recognize him if she saw him again.