[quote=@Apokalipse] Two posts really. I am better enough to get along in life, so I'll be catching up to everything Needs more weaknesses, in magic especially as well as personality wise. The negatives should always be the same amount or more than the positives (that's just my general rule to keep things balanced) also the personality needs more flaws. And I need more depth in the biography. I don't think that wizards go to University and I don't think that it translates to muggle schools either. So, I would find another reason for them to go to Salem: such as his mom taking a job in America and so they have to move. [/quote] I thought we agreed on an exchange program? And I do believe that wizarding universities were mentioned before, although I can't remember where. I've always been crap at describing personalities so I'll give you those, but as for the bio, their lives weren't that exciting XD I don't know what else to put in there. Oh, and I know that I have to write more out, but don't worry about me and balancing. I'll fix the sheet but rest assured, I'm not and never have been one for unbalanced characters. I find that the flaws make the character, even if I'm shit at listing it in the sheet. After all, that fucker was edited a LOT. I'm not that surprised that I missed something XD