[quote=@Prince of Seraphs]
[@Lugubrious] I know I won the contest but is there any criticism you can offer me or anything you especially liked? I am attempting to improve my writing so feedback both positive and negative is important.
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[quote=@Write]
I would also like any criticism or feedback on the submission I had even if you just want to PM it. Anything you liked/didn't like would be very helpful!
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[@Lugubrious] Reminder.