[@Zeeb Blade]
I'm gonna need a bit more detail on the bio, your weapons, and a solid chunk of words on the example post.

You lived with Elves but you never detail the very real fact that elves are generally very secretive and have many powerful warriors at their disposal. They lice to be over a thousand, so everything is generally done slow and steady. Your tenure with the elves would have been similar, so you would benefit from a hundred years of experience from a single bladesmasted or archer.  
Maybe bump the age up a bit, older and mature but still brash.
Eager to see and save the world.
Skys the limit, mate.