[@Oak7ree] Excellent, then I'll jump straight into it. 
No 1) Why, if James is from England, would he be hunting criminals in New York? Where is the motivation or the connection there? If he's remained in NY then where is he staying? How has he established himself as a vigilante in such a short time? Why would the papers be that concerned with another Ace vigilante appearing with so many from the original outbreak, 2nd gens and the new outbreak, focus on your character? Remember, we aren't following the same tropes as the comic superheroes here.

2) The timing of when you enter should be a few days/weeks AFTER Croyd has gone back to sleep. This means he's no longer a threat. Why would James be hunting him? Revenge? Doesn't seem very 'just'. The new Wild Card outbreak was not intentionally caused by Croyd, it was a by-product of his unpredictable Wild Card power. Also, in regards to timing/setting, 

3) What is the psychological factor for James transforming into a Wolfman? All of the Wild Card powers (Joker or Ace) are linked to the unconscious desires or fears of the infected person. That means that James, on some level, wanted this to happen to him. Why? What is the underlying reasoning behind that? 

OK, so it looks like I kinda railed on you for your character, and I do understand that it was a WIP, but then...it is a WIP. The Wild Card power is fine, that I've no problem with. The backstory however, just doesn't fit here. It would fit in a Marvel or DC comic...but Wild Cards aren't the comics, they're a literary piece and, more so, take a grounded approach to many characters and backstories.