[quote=@DeathXtheXTree] Changed a few things... re-read the Cs and... noticed my mistakes. XD I can be a scatter brain most times, or when I have caffeine, or just plain tired. [/quote] Ah, totally get it. Thanks. [quote=@DFTBA] On the subject, here's an extremely minor one for Hura's last post. Since this is the term he used to greet Kumanu, I'm going to assume that he's either mistaking Kumanu for someone else or is just that dazed. Getting a post up now, by the way. [/quote] I was aware of that, but though most Matoran referred to each other as such at some time. He's mostly being formal, but I also want to give him a unique speech pattern, as seen with his relation section with Kumanu. I was thinking it'd be a Bo-Matoran thing, or a Bo-Congro thing, ya know? I do see how it's a bit of a continuity error, but it's probably him not sure what he's seeing and being polite.