[quote=@Shikaru] [@Tracyarmav] I usually respond to people as if it's actually a live event and not during what they say. For example, you talk, and the post directly after is what someone else xays, and etc. [/quote] As do I, and that's fine, you just posted the Kinfe coming through your door interupting your speach, after I had done the same, which means our characters were talking at the exact same time. (which wouldn't happen simply because Dmitri will shut up anytime someone else starts talking) I'm not asking you to change how you write, I'm asking that you be aware of the flow of conversation through the posts, if that makes sense. If it doesn't don't worry about it. It's not a huge deal, just a minor, stylistic improvement.