[quote=@Klomster]
[@MacabreFox] I fixed the part you didn't like, i hope its more open now.

And as soon as some simple editing is done, the collab will be done.
Some juicy mano o mano action in that one :P


Oh, and i'll just make it more official, if i ever seem to want to take control of a characters actions and/or feelings, i might not be considering it such. And i don't want to make people feel like i'm trying to god-mod or anything. I have asperger and at times just act how i think a thing should be done.
Like when i dropped in an response from fox's character i thought was an appropriate one, i was wrong, and fox was a bit upset.

Just tell me, and i'll try to fix it.
I'm not unreasonable :)
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I appreciate the sincerity [@Klomster] (:, no hard feelings on my part.