[quote=@Onarax] As amusing as that would have been, I decided to simply change one detail in his backstory. What follows is the result. [/quote] Yeah that's what I like about these things, the subtle touch. I changed one trait about Sapphire, namely being faunus and her life unfolded in a completely different yet similar manor. [quote=@Guess Who] [@Prince of Seraphs], you want to judge the next contest? It was your idea. [/quote] It wasn't my idea I just promoted something someone else said in passing. Personally I want to participate in this contest but if no one else is will then I will grudgingly judge it though I will still submit an entree and ask for feedback.