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[@Natsu]Everything seems to be in order. The character certainly brings a new dynamic to the group and I am interested to see how he plays out. Accepted.

[@ArtifactCreator] The character is very interesting and I appreciate the emphasis on non physical abilities while still being useful. Almost everything is good but you're missing something in your notes that lets me know you read all the rules. I'd double check those and then get back to me. 

[@FacePunch] I know the sheet is unfinished but I just want to point out he's far too over powered for this RP. 200 tonnes and Mach 3 for a top speed, I mean maybe if this was a Justice League RP but I want kids who are developing and learning their abilities. I realize that by canon Martians are Kryptonian level hitters but I'd ask even a Kryptonian player to limit their abilities for the sake of the RP. So if you could tonne his abilities way down that would be great. For a Martian character I'd be ideally looking for power levels around those of Miss Martian in the Young Justice TV series. Otherwise the sheet is looking pretty good. 

[@OneWayOut] Like the ArtifactCreator, I love the emphasis on non offensive abilities. Everything is looking awesome but you're just missing one thing from your notes that lets me know you read the rules through. Correct that and you're good to go. 

[@Weird Tales] While I do like the fact you've gone with a Man-Bear (I have no problem with monstrous characters I swear!), I do have some concerns based on the sheet's current state. Firstly like Martian Boy, the character seems a little too developed to need to attend the school. Secondly, he seems more like a would be conqueror or invader than a potential candidate for the Teen Titans. The choice of weapons are also of a more lethal nature than I would like. That said I could see you going with a 'fish out of water' scenario so depending on the completion of the sheet I could be willing to give him a chance.