[quote=@Lord Wraith] [@King Kindred] I added a quick edit but I wasn't sure if you saw it. Might be something to consider. [/quote] Ooh. I didn't notice that. Yeah, I can definitely do that. [quote=@Tyler] Consider re-reading Wraith's post. He made an addition that I think slipped by! I'm up for Kieran and Freddie having some kind of relationship. But I'm also wanting Freddie to be enemies with Hillan's character, Luthor. It might be more interesting to have the El and Luthor be friends, due to their personalities but also their histories. In which case it would make more sense for Kieran and Freddie to not get along. [/quote] El and Luthor being friends could be interesting. But I don't think Kieran would be the type to not get along with someone just because of something between his friend and them. Though it depends on if Freddie does something to antagonize him.