Hi, I'm fairly new and would be interested in joining. Here's my CS, does it look alright?

Name: Kira
Age:19
Gender: Female
Deadly Sin or Holy Knight: Holy Knight
Magical Power: Alchemy (as in Full Metal Alchemist)
Weapon: Longbow with poison arrows, flame enhanced dagger, simple sword
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