[@ChildHoodRuined]

I still feel that the first paragraph of your character sheet remains too plagiarized.

Here is your first paragraph and the first paragraph on Marvel Wikia that correspond to yours.  The bold highlight identical phrases.  I do have to say that after looking over the application, the other paragraphs are much better.

[hider=Your]A few weeks [b]after Norman Osborn was arrested by the S.H.I.E.L.D[/b], and his identity as the Green Goblin was revealed to the public, [b]Osborn Industries was left abandoned[/b]. [b]Nearly two months before Peter Parker's death[/b], a criminal named Aaron Davis [b]broke into Osborn industries[/b]. Unknown to Aaron Davis, [b]a spider genetically enhanced with a OZ formula crawled into his bag[/b]. 
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[hider=Marvel Wikia][b]After Norman Osborn was arrested by S.H.I.E.L.D[/b], and publicly revealed as the Green Goblin, O[b]sborn Industries was left abandoned[/b]. [b]Nearly two months before Peter Parker's death[/b], a thief [b]broke into Osborn Industries[/b]. Unbeknownst to the thief, [b]a spider genetically enhanced with the Oz Formula crawled into his bag[/b].
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While you did fix the whole situation dealing with using a dead character (Cletus Kasday was only mentioned in the Ultimate Spider-Man run), it still leaves many questions unanswered.  How did Cletus Kasday get a symbiote (Venom already absorbed the 1610 Carnage into itself) and how did he get that device?  Why would he have it?  If you wanted these answered to be left as a "mystery" that will be revealed as the roleplay advances, then I would like you to PM me the answers to these questions so that I, as the GM, can know what is going on.

Also, you still mention Doc Ock in your sample post.

And what does the following mean?

[quote=Miles Morales Applicaton]because he believes Peter won't always be Spider-Man, and he will need to be the NEXT to continue the whole era of Spider-Man.[/quote]