[@Jay Kalton]
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If the GM didn't accept anymore characters, the Join Status shouldn't be apply :P
And if it ends up being full, I'll just use this character for another Naruto roleplay I think.
Thanks for the criticism, I don't see you as a bitch for doing this at all.
When writing this, I wasn't too sure on some things either to be honest, so discussing a few points might indeed be a good idea.

For the quote... haha, I kinda forgot that was a song by Hatsune Miku, I actually did think of it myself. It was meant in both a its my time to shine type of thinking, which could later change into a you will be my bitches (Madara style) later on if the curse of hatred gets it grip on her.
I'm not sure yet if She knows she is an Uchiha or not for story reasons. Having to hide it could be an interesting aspect, but not knowing it herself could also be interesting, so I still had to decide between those two. I think not knowing it would be the best option, so I think I will go with that for this character.

Konoha is indeed where the Uchiha decides, but this is indeed an alternative universe (I think?) but I think the Uchiha clan being slaughtered is still a keypoint. Some mistakes in writing this character were due to me seeking an excuse for her to be still alive at this point, and not be killed by Itachi/whoever did it in this universe.

As for those nicknames.. Akashiya Bloodmoon does sound kinda... edgy or something, thought the bloodmoon was kinda hinting at the konoha slaughter and the red of the sharingan. The other 2 were just shortcuts of her name.

As for her age.. Maybe it would be better to make her like 21, so that we could change the later plotpoint (her learning everything about ninjas in 2 years so she can be a genin for this story) to something more logical, being that she has been studying since 16 to become a genin.

As for her mother's name... yeah, I can see your point, but Yuri Uchiha just sounds weird..  Kiyomi Uchiha could work perhaps?

As for her length.. being 21, this could work now :P

Tbh I haven't ever watched Tokyo Ghoul, so I have no idea what you are talking about... XD

As for the Land of Iron thing, I know that the entire military is based on samurai, but did they ever state that its the only place samurai reside? I mean, for her past to work, Akashiya had to be grown up with samurai, and Kiyomi can't just go to Land of Iron or something, so theres still a plothole were we need to find a proper solution.

As for the Uchiha slaughter thing... Her not knowing she is an Uchiha would be the right solution I think?

For the quickly trusting thing.. Yeah I see the problem, thus why its a fun element for her. She is pure, and she has yet to experience the feeling of betrayal.

Well, she has some friends in a local village owned by samurai I would think. I agree that her going to the Land of Iron alone isn't likely, thus why I thought it was a good idea to have some kind of village owned by samurai.

And yeah, the village thing.. its exactly why I thought having a samurai village close to Konoha (which got slaughtered anyway) was a good idea.

As for the taking her in part... good point. A possibility is that she met some of the samurai in Konoha that recognized her or something?

As for the kekkei genkai point... good point.. I have no answer for that to be honest.

For the sharingan part, her eyes basically become sharingans without any of the tomoe's visible. Its a light version of the sharingan. Perhaps I could rewrite that part, maybe she was training outside of the village with some samurai, when they suddenly got attacked. Akashiya sees this, and becomes afraid that she would die too, thus this early version of sharingan triggering. 

As for the jutsu scaring them.. yeah, thats why they want her to gtfo to konoha lol, they are afraid they can't contain her power.
Lets change it so they basically kidnapped her, and forced her to join Konoha, even if she doesn't want to?

As for the hand signs thing... Maybe this jutsu with her basic sharingan doesn't require handsigns? Almost none of the sharingan jutsu require handsigns anyway.

As for her mary sue vibes in school... changing her to be 21 years old so she actually has been to school for a while would make it more logical, no?

As for the attacked part.. yeah, thats exactly why I thought of it being a small samurai village near konoha..

And indeed.. her future will be bad, thats for sure...

As for the Taijutsu part... good point... Hmm.. she is skilled in it, but has only been training it since she is in Konoha, so she is still learning it? That would make sense?

As for the sharingan thing.. its basically a no tomoe clear red sharingan that showed, its a weak version of the sharingan. The true sharingan has yet to awaken.

As for the illusion part... yes, she could act like it would be shoved up their ass, or for example, she could make it look like she is about to cut their throat, while she is actually stabbing them in the stomach or something.

The reason I considered it to be such a high rank is that its actually a really, really weak version of Tsukuyomi. She changes reality by making you believe the sword is at x place, while it is at another. the strain to the eyes is to make up for not requiring any form of handsigns.


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