[quote=@Lmpkio] [@Archmage MC] There appears to be some problems: [b]1).[/b] Considering her range on just pulling objects via Pocket Space and these Portable Holes, the super strength you present is not needed. Limit her strength to that around Captain America's and you should be fine in that category. [b]2).[/b] While toon physics are an interesting touch, I would recommend them to be limited to some scenarios, compared to like all the time. [b]3).[/b] Entropy. 'When Light is touching an object, said object can not regain energy.' Out of all the powers I see in your CS, I cannot allow you to let her pass without removing that power. Self-explanatory really. [b]4).[/b] Can you give us some clarifications on how she can be defeated? Like, detail you know? Can she be killed in any way? [/quote] 1. Eh, I'm using basically every Tex Avery/Hanna Barbara cartoon trope and TBH thats what a cartoon can do. The strength thing is from Ed, Edd, n Eddy, which is sort of an homage to that era of cartoons. 2. Cartoon physics are more of a weakness than a strength due to how things work. I mean, its sorta hard to make them not be active all the time, or most of them anyway such as she can't bleed. If you can give me some problematic bits or ideas on how to make them context sensitive, or you don't mind me just saying "context sensitive" then I'm all ears. 3. Thats just so she can beat superman into a pulp but lose to batman. I don't mind removing it, just saying thats what its there for. xD (I hate Superman.) 4. Sure, I'll add a weakness section, since her weaknesses are sprinkled in with her strengths. I'll edit this post when I've made the section to let you know. Should be in like 5 or 10 minutes? EDIT: OK, I thought of and clarified some. If you can think of more go for it. I don't think she can be killed without using cosmic forces since she is a toon, which are notably extremely difficult to put down for good. If you have any ideas on that, let me know, I'm all ears. Its under her Powers hider. ACtually, wanna take this to PMs to make it smoother?