[quote=@Foster] 2nd try: [hider=Marlene Abdelkadar] Name: Marlene Abdelkadar Age: 19 Gender: Female Disposition: Sly, intolerably persistent, very emotionally invested and motivated. Background: Hailing from war-torn USK/PU borderlands, unlike Leclerc, her unit was issued with second-hand FRAMES after the PU was already well-equipped to deal with the threat. Constant supply-problems and frequent breakdowns from skating across sand-dunes meant her squad operated under-strength in guerilla-warfare, often the pilots functioned as light infantry while the few remaining FRAMES provided much-needed fire-support to their guerrilla campaign. On more than one occasion, civilian-FRAMES were pressed into service either just to keep a few more frames running, or retained simply because their smaller size was better suited to the sort of operations they conducted. When the war ended, their independence secured, there was a massive draw-down and disarmament of their forces as USK focused its resources on rebuilding and caring for their people, an act that quickly highlighted the difference between the PU and USK. Marlene's unit was one of the first to be scrapped, handing in many of their converted FRAMES for economic development, while nearly all their best FRAMES ended up being conglomerated into a single centralized unit. Angered by her new vestigial purpose in the military, sitting behind a desk, she quit and purchased a surplus FRAME and hit the mercenary-market. [hider=Appearance][url=http://miliwoman.com/Algeria/Police/military_woman_algeria_police_000002.jpg.html][img]http://miliwoman.com/cache/Algeria/Police/military_woman_algeria_police_000002.jpg_530.jpg[/img][/url][/hider] Inventory: -AKSN-75U "Tanker's Krinkov" with infra-red scope and IR laser-sight/illuminator plus a 75 round drum because if she gets into a firefight out of her FRAME, it won't last long enough for her to get a chance to reload. Funds: 312,210c [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AjXr9Nj5ZbI]Other[/url][/hider] [hider=MP21-AC YASSIR] Name: MP21-AC Handou "Yassir" Manufacturer: Kelhei Manufacturing Height: 4.3 meters Weight: 6627 kg Armor: 45 mm durasteel alloy Speed (Walk): 42 kph Speed (Skate): 72 kph Sensor range: 2 km Communication range: 10 km Operating range: 500 km Power: 140 Weight: 85 Price: 221,590c Armaments: 4x LBU-3 HMG 1200c 12w GPR-21 15kc 10w BAD Light Guided Mortar - 20kc 20w Extras: EVF “Chameleon” Active Camouflage 35kc 5w[/hider] 140 frame limit - 85 frame - 47 Armament/Extra = 8w reserve (82% of max capacity) 600k Starting balance - 221.59k Frame - 66.2k Armament/Extra = 312,210c Odd Note: despite using weapons that did not exist in the original application, ending-balance was nearly identical. I'm being pestered to post in a few 1x1s and a tac-team RP at the moment [/quote] Looks good to me!