Excuse me? um...so... this is bugging me
[quote]She looked back at the dragon as her eyes shine that of a dragon as well as she was a half breed at some ways you could say. [/quote]
I thought you disallowed half breeds?
[quote] She blinked and placed the blade down slowly and put it twenty feet from here.[/quote]
Okay so maybe she put it down really far out and came back-
[quote]She closed her eyes softly and opens her hand and her sword came over to her and sheathed itself around her waist.[/quote]
So wait does she have telekinesis this wasn't established
[quote]She said a smile on her face a eyes glows happily, she gave off a feeling that was very safe she looked at her hands that glows with a dragons fire and smiles softly[/quote]
She's a mage? When could she actually manipulate fire into her hand? Matter of fact if she was locked up in her room till she was fifteen how does she know how to hunt and survive in the wild? Why is she so happy that shes spent her entire life locked in her room only to be tossed out and forced to survive in the wilderness she would have never been exposed to in her room?
[quote] She said smiling and took a sip of tea smiling as it was good, she didn't put sugar into things and for a reason it activated her dragon side and became hyper. [/quote]
Wait what? The kingdom fears the dragons like they're mindless beasts of torment when have they been known to be hyper on SUGAR?
[quote]She looked at her hand as she grew sharp claw like fingers. She retracted them to not scare the poor creature off and smiles gently.[/quote]
Wait okay she can turn INTO a dragon but how does she know how to control it so well, when did she have the time to train?! And its a dragon why would it fear another dragon, or dragon like person when for one the princess tiny next to him that he could easily reach down and EAT?
[quote]She feared her kingdom wrath on dragons, she wanted to help put dragons and her people back together.[/quote]
When were they ever together and when they were, why did they decide to split up and be separate?!?!