[quote=@Mr_pink] Declined. Sorry but the overall grammar in this app is not up to par with my standards as a GM. Also in my opinion the appearance breaks rule 5. I'd also doubt any forest would be safe enough to raise a family in, let alone a clan what with the grimm being around. [/quote] I edited the Character Sheet. did all the edits that you pointed out [hider=My Hider] Name: Seth Rush Age: 17 Team: SINS (If this is ok for a team name?) S - I - N - S - Seth Appearance: Seth is a 5’11 white fox Faunus with short silver hair, fox ears that has the left ear priced with a small wolf erring in it. He has Candy apple red eyes and his right fang is chipped. He is normally seen wearing a blue t-shirt with a design of a cross exploding from a skull as chips of bone fly from the open wound. Black jeans, black and white Nike sneakers, and Around his neck is a necklace. [hider=necklace] [img]http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/images_zpsufyqqnck.jpg[/img] [/hider] Weapon Name: Two Wolf Bite Yoyos (Large yoyo’s that have chainsaw teeth around the edges with string made from thin titanium) Weapon Appearance/Function: (The yoyos have slots where dust crystals can be inserted to added elemental attacks to the yoyos) [img]http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/Weapons/Wolf_the_Yo_Yo_by_malmida_zps28ce5472.jpg[/img] Personality: Seth is a kind individual who will put his own life on the line to make sure others are safe. However, he can come off as strict when the situation calls for it. He likes to crack a joke here and there to make others laugh, but if the situation becomes a matter of life and death he will talk in a more strict tone and make himself seem like a jerk to save the lives of others around him. He is a hardworking person who strives on the strength to protect and maintain life, even if his life would be taken to do so. History: Seth was raised by the Moon Bloods: a clan of wolf Faunus that lives in a small village outside the city. Dagger, the leader of the Moon Bloods and a few other clan members found Seth on the path to his village after they had finished hunting for food and herbs. He was only three months old and sleeping inside a cardboard box. Dagger had considered leaving Seth to the elements until Serenity offered to take care of him. Dagger knew that she had recently lost her son and husband to a pack of Grimm and agreed. Even though Serenity now took care of Seth like he was her own son, Seth seemed to find his way into Daggers hut and fall asleep on the sheep skin rug in front of the fire pit. Even though Dagger originally saw Seth as another mouth to feed and an outsider, Seth seemed to imprint on him and he took him under his wing. Dagger acted as Seth’s father even though he and Serenity weren’t married. Seth still called him papa and learned the secrets of the Moon Bloods. When Seth turned 9, Dagger introduced him to the Moon Bloods way of fighting called Wolf Combat: a cross between mixed martial arts and parkour. The fighting style tapped into their animal instincts to detect danger from affair and neutralize it using all their senses and animal nature. However, because this form of combat was crafted to be used by wolf Faunus, Seth had a hard time learning it. It took him 5 years to finally get to a high enough level to be considered a hunter in the pack. However, even though he was a candidate to be part of the hunting pack, he still needed to go through initiation. Seth could feel the butterflies in his stomach as he stood outside the forest. The initiation called for the candidates to travel into the woods and slay their first Grimm on their own. Seth only watched through the huts in the village as the clans hunters fought off Grimm attacks. Seth traveled through the woods in search of a Grimm. He knew the larger the Grimm the more probability he would be considered a hunter in the pack. However, he also knew: the bigger the Grimm, the less likely he’d make it out alive. Grimm were not like Faunus. They were nothing more than feral monsters that would attack anyone that got in their way. Dagger had given Seth the very same weapons he had used when he went through initiation. Two yoyo chainsaws called Wolf Bite Yoyos. They were in good shape considering they were so old. Seth stopped when he heard a twig snap, then creaking; finally he turned when he heard a massive thud. Standing were the tree had fallen was a large Ursa. Seth slowly back away from the creature before he panicked and ran for the nearest tree and climbed up the branches. He sat perched high in the tree as he tried to control his breathing. The Ursa slowly walked towards the tree and began to use it like a back scratcher. It seemed the Ursa hadn’t discovered him yet. Seth knew if he could keep quiet the creature would leave, but he also knew if he didn’t return with a Grimm pelt. He wouldn’t be considered part of the hunting pack. So he swallowed his fear and leaped from the tree. He landed on the Ursa’s shoulders and proceeded to palm strike the back of the Ursa’s head before he leaped off. The Ursa staggered before it shook off the attack and roared. Seth quickly took out the yoyos and readied himself for the Ursa’s counterattack. The Ursa rushed at Seth who side stepped the monster and flung his yoyos at the creature. The chainsaw blades moved to the outer radius of the yoyos and began to spin just before they connected with the flesh of the Ursa. The creature roared and swiped at the strings, but Seth pulled back the yoyos before the Ursa’s claws could strike. The chainsaw blades retracted back into the yoyo so Seth could catch them. The Ursa once again attacked and again Seth side stepped it, but the Ursa quickly spun around and swiped at Seth. All Seth could do was put his arms up in defense. He felt the force and power of the attack before he flew backwards and slammed into the ground. He gasped as all the air was sucked from his lungs. He coughed and wheezed as he tried to catch his breath. The monster roared again and charged towards Seth and all he could do was to put up his arms in defense again. This time however, when the Ursa attacked. Its paw slammed into a silver aura surrounding Seth’s body. The Ursa swung again, but wasn’t able to break the aura. Cuts appeared on Seth’s body, but he felt no pain. Seth couldn’t comprehend what was happening until he remembered Dagger explain that some warriors have the ability to use their aura in unique and strange ways. Another strike hit his aura and he could feel it wavering. Seth saw an opportunity to strike when the Ursa tilted its head in confusion. Seth pulled back his fist and bashed it into the side of the Ursa’s face. Cuts ripped into his arm, but he still didn’t feel any pain. He quickly followed the punch with a flurry of kicks that staggered the creature. Gone where the thought of fighting for survival. Now they were replaced with the thoughts of ripping, tearing, and carving the skin from the monsters bones. A Chester cat grin formed on Seth’s as he flung the yoyos at the Ursa. The chainsaw blades whirled and howled like a wolf before they dug into the monsters flesh. As night fell, Seth returned to the village with the pelt of the Ursa on his back. The village rejoiced and celebrated long into the night, but all were not so cheerful. Dagger seemed troubled around Seth and when asked why. Dagger told Seth he felt an uneasy primal rage deep inside of Seth. A few months later Dagger offered Seth a poster about Haven Academy and told him that this school would help quell his inner primal rage. Seth laughed and joked that dagger was scared that Seth would challenge him to be the clan’s leader. Dagger didn’t seem amused and revealed that he feared Seth’s primal rage would hurt those close to him. Seth could see the concern in Dagger’s eyes and agreed to enroll in Haven Academy. Emblem: [img]http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/wolf_emblem_by_zaidovs_zpsucmt1jis.jpg [/img] Semblance: No pain no Gain: Seth's Semblance turns off the pain receptors in his mind and nerves so he can fight longer without feeling pain. His Semblance allows his Aura to coat him like a suit of armor to keep weapons and projectiles from damaging his body. However, even though his aura coats him. If it would be hit by a weapon or bullet, a cut will appear n his body. Once the aura is broken, his Semblance is terminated until he is able to regain enough stamina to reuse it. However, there is a down side: Seth’s Semblance triggers something in his mental state that causes him to go mad and attack anything and everything around him should it be over used. His Semblance taps into his animal instincts and along with his madness he becomes a feral beast and losses all his humanity. Other: None [/hider]