[@Cultural Titan] lol 
Firstly, if I could just say that I appreciate all that you said. 

I did ask mostly because I saw what you had commented on other characters. I didn't read very much on the rest of them, but I did like the insight you brought. Looking at things from a different perspective certainly can help when trying to create a solid character.

The part about her being a bit stronger, I felt that in order for her to be a viable candidate for pit fighting, she'd have to have something like that. I didn't want to make her op and say she was so much stronger, but I totally get what you're saying.

I had created the character for another rp on another forum, and I wanted to get her here. Unfortunately with me being sick and busy with work, I may have rushed a bit :p  I will take your points into consideration, make some adjustments and wait for the powers that be to comment. Thank you :)