[@WilsonTurner]

Hey friend, I'm not the one accepting characters or anything, but I did feel like pointing something out in your sheet; You have a marine that had graduated from West Point. . . Sorry man, the only place you're going after graduating West Point is the Army. If you still want him a marine, then have him attending the Naval Academy at Annapolis, Michigan, if not then he should be a soldier in the US Army. Just a little tidbit to make it look better, :)

Sorry, one more thing; if he graduated from a military academy, he would be a fully commissioned officer, and not a warrant officer. 

Again, just tidbits I thought that would help your character look even better.