Guys, I need your opinion on the coming climax of the First Major Plot Arc; details are below:

[hider=Potential Plot, Contains Borderline Mature Stuff]Here goes. Once the group sent to attack the Enclave-held hospital returns - which can be fast-forwarded if it's moving too slow - the Enclave, with two Vertibirds and 20 men in Power Armor, will go to Liberty Island, and massacre the defenders, except for the PCs, who are protected by, sigh, Plot Armor. The PCs, perhaps with Brotherhood aid (this will be left up to the players to avoid too much railroading), are going to try and hold back the enemy in time for an evacuation, but eventually, they would be captured (unless they run away, which, again, I will permit to reduce railroading). 

Once the PCs are all captured, Colonel Alan Anderson, who will be leading the attack, will then gloat at everyone, threatening to enslave or kill them all. That is when Par comes in, asking to speak.

Par then asks Alan to let the other PCs go, even the ones belonging to the Brotherhood, pointing out that if they are allowed to leave, then they would be carrying a message to the inhabitants of New York of Enclave Power. He also points out that it is better to have one compliant slave instead of ten or so resistant others. Alan indicates that he agrees with Par's logic...then in order to test the 19-year old's compliance, orders him to [i]strip[/i]. Par does so, and Alan gloats, saying that he [i]will[/i] let the Other PCs go if it would secure him such an obedient toy.

He then places a slave collar on Par..before either 1.) Letting the PCs go, and 2.) If the PCs do not want to run away for some reason, the Brotherhood does a sneak attack that manages to rescue the PCs except for Par, who's already naked and collared. 

There is a brief time skip to Sky Citadel, then, and the PCs ponder on what their next move is...and also find out that the evacuation failed; the Enclave captured and enslaved Liberty Island's population anyway (this can be modified by PC Actions). Either way, the Enclave is now stronger than ever, and the PCs need to find a way to break their hold. This is their Darkest Hour...but there is a chance for a Dawn.

Also, to reassure you guys, Par does [i]not[/i] get raped; he manages to distract Alan using non-sexual means long enough to avoid being taken advantage of long enough for the PCs to rescue him.
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