Alright, I am back everyone. "Where did you go?" You ask. Well my laptop's fan died which made operation pretty difficult but after ripping the thing apart and rebuilding it I am back in business. [quote=@Blue Demon] [@Lord Wraith]There is such a thing as a sports need you know;) [/quote] I have no need for sports ;) [quote=@FacePunch] [@Lord Wraith] Alright. What do you think needs changing to make Kade acceptable? When you say too developed, are we talked physicals, martial skill or emotionally? When you say his morality is questionable, what do you mean exactly? That he's killed? Or he's related to a number of villains/anti heroes? [/quote] What I meant was Kade seems to have a name, reputation and experience already built up. The way I read the sheet, it felt like the only reason Kade would be at Corrigan was for rehabilitation not, education. The idea behind the RP is that most heroes have decided to not train sidekicks in the field but to rather create and institution for training in order to give the next generation of heroes a head start in a controlled environment. According to the CS, Kade has already had one on one training with many of the best and has essentially all the tools he would need to go into the field and fight heroes. While you intention may have been the loss of his eyes would be a set back that puts him on the same ground as the other characters I personally disagree and find the character too matured for the RP's setting. In terms of his morality, Kade comes across as a mercenary for hire and while he is the daughter of Rose, the chosen alias of 'Ravager the Terminator' doesn't exactly incite hope into the general populace. Much like Weird Tales' first character, the alien bear, Kade comes across as out of place in the nature of the RP. Were the setting ever to expand beyond the borders of Corrigan, the character could work but I don't see Kade as a classmate of S'tann's.