Cool stuff, a few things: The stat section is just kind of hard to read, if you could just bold the stats, so that it's easier to see the skills that go under them. Maybe put some extra spaces in between for more clear division. You're two points short in stats(I know you're not finished, but I wanted to make sure you knew this) and one short in skills. When you write the skill, don't write how many points were put into it, write the number of points [i]pluse[/i] the stat that controls it. Because that gives you the dice you roll and that's the important number. We can do the math, but you don't need to make us. Lastly, I want to be clear that I don't want to retcon your character into the Jedi entourage. You'll need to start as non-affiliated with either order, and at this point in the game the best place to start is employed under Dren's archaeology company.