[@BlackRose] As I said over PM, that is a hugely impressive amount of writing! It all checks out to me, so post it up in the characters tab and then try and jump in and post an IC post as well!

Welcome aboard.

EDIT: Just realised that there is one small hiccup. You can only have one Racial Trait per race, so you'll have to choose "Awesome Strength" OR "Increased Fortitude", not both